Sharing some tips I've picked up working with writers as an editor and coach!

  1. Ya can you help me, am building world around multiple layers. See it as every floor life's different and is a one World from the other but the are connected in the story. Every floor has a different style that describes the civilization.

  2. Very nice list. Oh, 'show don't tell' absolutely applies. The number of times I've heard 'I attack X' or 'I roll persuasion on Y', ugh. "I swing my sword at the bugbear's throat!" "I play with a gold coin while talking to the leader of the thieves." That's what rollplaying IS! You don't need to give a paragraph per action, but don't 'roll to see if I learn something'.

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