In terms of tone, it's primarily serious, but in an action/adventure film mode - occasionally, there's humor, but it arrives organically from what's happening. A lot of visual humor.
That's fair! I'd want to keep them primarily in the background - it's only Sonic and Robotnik that are important for the bulk of it, once the thing really gets going.
In terms of tone, it's primarily serious, but in an action/adventure film mode - occasionally, there's humor, but it arrives organically from what's happening. A lot of visual humor.
I would say there's a bit too much focus on the humans in this script.
That's fair! I'd want to keep them primarily in the background - it's only Sonic and Robotnik that are important for the bulk of it, once the thing really gets going.