My World's Magic System & Critique

  1. I think one approach is to ask what kind of conflict can you draw out of this. And then once you have those, maybe do another pass on the world building to add elements to heighten or create other types of conflict. Even small ones that can be used for tension in passing.

  2. It’s kind of confusing how the magic comes from twin gods, and is in everything. But it is also more specifically in four “Orins”. That sounds like two different magic systems mixed together.

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